Wikenburg, Amy

[Rainy Amina]

..The Puppeteer..

Your name: Call me Rainy, those of you from UHB know me as Love.
Age: 15
Years RPG'ing: erm...two, but I'm not that good.

..The Puppet..

Full Name: Amy Christine Wikenburg
Age: 23
Height: 5'9
Weight: 124

Hair: Short and brown, like, frames the face short.
Eyes: Deep Brown.
Ancestry(if known): German / Native American

Played By: Rainy Amina
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Occupation: Undecided

History (100 words min.): Living in a family of mom, dad, and herself, Amy grew up as "The Rich Kid" in school. She occupied all the freetime she had, by going down to the local barn and watching the lessons. She loved watching the kids jump their horses, but stopped just watching when one of the poorer girls from school noticed her and shouted "Why do you just sit there and slobber all over the rail? Why don't you join us?" She soon became friends with the girl and joined the barn. Though her parents thought she should join the larger, more fast-paced, newer, shinier barn. Amy was mortified that her parents made her switch barns and refused to go to that barn. Relenting, her parents allowed her to re-join her original barn. But three years ago, they moved and there weren't many barns here. She wants now, to rescue a horse, and work with it here at Stargate Farms.

Personality (100 words min.): Amy is a kind girl, but has a fiery temper. She has been known to start a fight over the smallest of things, and once attacked a boy twice her age in a fit of rage. She won, but only because the boy refused to hit her back. She is very touchy on the subject of family, because her parents had put up her younger brother up for adoption, rather than raising him themselves. She keeps in contact with him and consistently sends him 200$ a month. Her parents don't know this. Apart from the fact that she sometimes has split-personality moments. She is a pretty good girl.

..The Horse..

** This is optional. You can adopt one at the humane society if you wish. **

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[Gretchen Peterson]

The part where it says Played By, you need to chose 'someone' to represent this chacter, be it a celebrity, yourself, or another person. You also need to include a picture but other than these few things you have a very good application. Please correct these errors and I'll re-review it XD